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-Danariana- 2009-11-23 . chapter 21
Another awesome story. I enjoyed it just as much if not even more, as The Games that Play Us.
I just wanted to let you know that! I added it to my favourites! And I am SO reading you're other story! :D

Dani
porcelain angels 2009-10-31 . chapter 1
Oh my, your chapters are so long. They'll take forever for me to read them. XD Pfft, wish I could write chapters that long.

Anywho, interesting idea you have here.

Ah ha ha, not all witches are ugly. Hm, depends on who's doing it all. The green, lumpy skin chicks yeah, they're not so easy on the eyes. Hee hee. Aww, this character doesn't know the origins of Halloween, thinking it's just something people who want money made up. No, no, no. XD The history of Asians celebrate this kind of stuff is interesting. The boys would dress up as women, some older asians have pierced ears because of this, because demons would bypass women. There was this old korean dude I knew of, he had pierecd ears cause his mom was trying to protect him from evil spirits. And the bridges over the water gardens were all zigzag cause apparently ghosts can only go in a straight line, takes 'em awhile to turn so it protects them from evil spirits. Oh, but this wasn't just for one day, as it's not widely celebrated in Japan, they have their Obon holiday instead, which is in mid-august, which westerners would consider All Soul's Day or Festival of the Dead. Some fun facts for ya. XD

Oh and the Korean manga, “Bride of the Water God” has recently addressed the idea of dressing a young boy up as girl for his protection.

It's all very interesting. I learned all of this myself through someone's author's note to her story. Thought I'd share. XD

Anywho, this was a good prologue. ;3

SMOOCHES
MUCH LOVE
-porcelain angel/aka Bleeding White Lily
goodbyes 2009-09-19 . chapter 21
kiss of death was awesome...
goodbyes 2009-09-18 . chapter 15
i love this story


and i miss damien!
Forever Screaming 2009-08-25 . chapter 21
This was a FABULOUS story. Amazing, honestly it had me hookled for the whole two days I was reading it.
One think that irked me, though, was that you repeated things a hell of a lot. Keep in mind that your allowed to skip certain details of the characters day so as not to bore your readers =P
Other than that, this was a very original story in my eyes and I loved the way you had a song quote at the beginning of each chapter.

Thanks for the good read, toodles ! ;D
castiel89 2009-08-21 . chapter 21
I absolutely LOVED this story. I would have reviewed long before now but I was without a computer and my phone wouldn;t let me comment. :( You are a very goo writer and engross me with every single one of your stories at the moment! Well done!

I loves the supernatural feel to this story and it inspired me to come up with my own!

Can't wait for the newest story's update!
Miss-You-Too 2009-08-18 . chapter 21
Aw mushy and great! I really admire how your able to incorporate characters that grow up with life's hardships; it makes them seem more real. Anyway thi story was awesome! I'm not one for mushy stories but this I could do (and it's not because of Damien's deliciousness)but because of the characters. Extremely entertaining.
nichloe 2009-08-18 . chapter 21
Oh wow, you rock. I've never had a story dedicated to me, you rock! And I'm definitely going to stick around to read your other stories. Too bad about your other story idea, but I understand that it's too personal to put out especially since it's about you. Can't wait to read what you come up with next.

Nichloe
nichloe 2009-08-18 . chapter 20
What a shock, she doesn't hate Halloween any more. This chapter was adorable. Now, I'm going to read the epilogue.

Nichloe
Dramatic Irony 2009-08-17 . chapter 19
Ah, that was sweet. Love well-written happy endings. No, the kiss scene wasn't bad. How are Azalea's friends going to react to Damien's return?...
Miss-You-Too 2009-08-17 . chapter 19
I love happy endings! Now they can go and have sexy babies! Yay! Lol, Channing is frigging hot. I mean wow, those muscles make ya wanna drool...
nichloe 2009-08-17 . chapter 19
For a sec I thought you weren't even going to add Damien's decision in this chapter, so when he popped up you caught me by surprise. I liked this chapter though. Wow, I honestly love your stories, they're just great and fun to read. I do hope you get them published someday. Well, update soon! Can't wait for the next two chapters.

Nichloe
Miss-You-Too 2009-08-13 . chapter 18
Yay he's alive! I had a feeling something like this would happen...well kinda...Em anyways I can't wait to read more.
gemini613 2009-08-13 . chapter 18
ah! this is killing me. waiting impatiently for the next chapter. btw, thanks for the rather quick updates. it would be even worse if they weren't so frequent. =]
nichloe 2009-08-13 . chapter 18
I really liked this chapter, and I liked that quote by Albert Schweitzer. I like that you left it as a cliffhanger, the next chapter will be a surprise. I can't wait to read it, update soon!

Nichloe
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