That was completely perfect in every way! Lol!

Very smooth! I liked it :)

Oh my god, wow, I have never read anything like this or heard of it...well I have, but that sort of was about man stealing, totally different...than this.

Anyway, you should make this longer, maybe add another chapter, because, I'm really interested in reading more about the "maneater" and what happens next. =)

Ha! That was really good -- fifty word stories are so hard! O_O Excellent, though.

C