I don't usually read horror stories, but this one caught my eyes. It's a great piece, with the tone really in tune with the melancholic theme set. The only thing that put off a great deal of impact was the predictable ending...I was hoping something different would happen. But yeah, the most sensible finish seemed to be that. Anyways, I liked it so much that I included it in my favourites. Great work!

Wow. That's like, almost like a twisted horror. I loved how the guy, (Don't remember his name, OH) David seemed so smug. You totally told that out loud.
Good story, gaves me the chills seeing as how i'm homealone and have three wardrobes in my room.
Ha-ha.
It could even seem like it could be turned into a movie, or something.
It was a moving and creep-ish story.
Way to go!