i like how it sounds like you are going through a box of memories, or pictures. a snippet here, an idea there... very well done.

^_^ been catching up on some reading these past few days.. trying to rutsle my own muse up again.

wow this is so beautiful. wonderfully written: great rhythm, word choice, emotion. i love it.

i would love opinions from a talented writer like yourself on my work, it would mean a lot!!

Hi Anjeni, I don't really come here anymore, but you're still on my Alert list so I got e-mails linking me to the poems you just put up. I read them all and wanted to say I loved them, but I especially love this one, everything about it...the feeling of having forgotten something, the incomplete bit of Daedalus's name, the stanza on imagery...

I write when I get a chance, but it's hard, so sometimes I avoid it, and when I do, I feel guilty, and it's a bit of a bad cycle to be trapped in. Anyway, I know how it is to regret not writing. But I guess what I've learned is that writing is forgiving, and it's ok if you don't write in a while. It'll be there when you come back to it. Ok, I'm rambling now so I'll wrap this up. I just wanted you to know that I really enjoyed this, and I hope you keep writing. Good luck. = )