That was so beautiful! It really captured these true emotions!

This is so sad. But stunning. Nice job.

This poem's message is powerful. It's good to let your emotions take over sometimes--it's often the only way to heal. Keep up the good work. :)

this is a very touching poem!
"I really feels I'm invisible and everybody can see me" is a great descption (though it is a paradoxon)
Hope you feel better after having cried
Franziska

"somebody will hear and come to you to heal
every wound that pierces your broken body."

I loved that part, very true and very beautifully chosen words. Cool poem! =D

I love you poem it's beautiful yet sad
nice keep it up

Aw wow beautiful poem! 2nd stanza 1st line remove 's' from 'feels'? Write on!

~Anna~ ^_^

It good.
I like it, well done :]