OMG I love this fairytale!

yay! it was short, but i absolutely loved it! the ending was sweet!

That was beautiful I loved it. you got some good stuff.

i really love this fractured fairy tale! it's great! bartholomew come back and save rapunzel!

i bet Dame Gothel's gonna pop soon, isn't she? i just know it lol MORE MORE MORE! i like this story! w

...wheres the rest of the story? lol

This is so cute so far! I really like your use of modern language in this fairy tale retelling; I don't know, because it's so out of place, it kind of a fits in a way. Write more, I want to read!