 Isca 2009-07-17 . chapter 1"It does not matter. He would come even without her there." This ending is phenomenal. There's something fascinating about the tone of this line--it leaves the reader begging for more. It's interesting that this man doesn't need a woman to make him happy--he's 'sexy' enough for the both of them, by the sounds of it. His desires are his top priority--women are only tools for him to use towards his satisfaction. He believes he's a strong man, but really, he's weak on the inside and tries to mask his insecurities by 'screwing' as much as possible. Again, your work is always very captivating. Keep up the awesome work. :D |
 Faithless Juliet 2009-07-11 . chapter 1A very strong portrait of a man, and his desires. He is a predator, yet, also weak. Keep up the good work.
Much love,
Juliet. |