you voice flows

my favorite line in the poem.

You picked the sort've poem which has been done and done again countless times, and yet yours was so unique. The way you used parentheses was genius. Great job!

Did you ever see the movie The Love Letter? It's about a poem that makes it's way around a small town and everyone thinks it's written to them. This kinda reminded me of that. If you haven't seen it, I recommend it.