Amazing. I almost suspected the ending, but it still was a bit of a shock.

This thouroughly creeped me out! But in a good way! I hope you keep on with this story.

Wow, going in, I wasn't expecting that ending at all! This is extremely well-written, and a very orignal concept too. I know the story was only intended to be a short piece, but I think it has potential to delve much deeper. I look forward to reading more of your work. =)