 Venz0r 2009-07-11 . chapter 1I found this very relatable and touching. I understand pretty much every thought the narrator comes up with, can sympathize. It's a shame to be so pessimistic, but sometimes we can't help it.
I really liked this piece, I'm sure there are a lot of kids out there who feel this way right now. The narrator gives them a voice. If there was one way to give them hope, or take away from their pessimism, it's the thought that there are others like them, and that they really aren't alone in thinking this.
Overall, a great piece. |