I like the sound of 'she' - makes her seem like a protective mother. The 2nd half of the first line is certainly homey =)

The poem has a comforting flow and I like the way you progress from the abstract image to twilight, to the night and then daylight.

This is really good, the flow is impeccable and the concept/imagery is nice and mystifying. I think if you were to have added another line or two it wouldn't have done much good, this is a perfect length.

Very nice.

I love tghe rhyme scheme, its very pretty

This is so inspiring! It is so short, but has so much power to it. Good job^-^

Bravo! I haven't read something so brief and well done in a long time. It's difficult (if not impossible) to make a poem's meaning flow without the reader hardly being aware of the words, but you come close.
(P.S. Thanks for reviewing my poem "Blood And Dreams.")

short and sweet. very cute!

This is really good, I love the subject of the poem. Brilliant job.^^

I'm really liking this. Though simple, the rhyming is beautiful and the imagery is very original.

Lovely :) It is making me want to read the last of the Tir Alainn Trilogy as it reminds me of the Sleep Sister...
I like: "she leads us through the twilight"-- it also reminds me of Morag a little... :)

The rhyming scheme is good as it doesn't sound too forced. You've used some lovely imagery, particularly in the line, "Lacing our good wishes, with shelter we can roam."

I love this...

Just like Morag's sister... *is asjamed at having temporarily forgoten her name*

You're brilliant!