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Reviews For: The Warmth of Our Socks
lordcloudx 2009-09-22 . chapter 1
This was a nice read. I'd like to see similar stories from you. I especially liked the lines at the end.

Typo, I think.

"I have often wondered whether it is wrong that I find romance in the moments I spend alone in the winds of the ice-dessert"

don't you mean 'desert?'
Anne 2009-07-15 . chapter 1
What an unusual snippet. Is it part of a larger story? You really have a gift!

Did you catch the missing word in the 4th from the bottom paragraph.
Prospero the Magnificent 2009-07-11 . chapter 1
This was not only creative, but extremely touching. I love how you began with the description of the socks, and ended on such a touching note.

That being said, there are a few typos that are slightly distracting such as "When I through the drifting snow," and "My wife had shown not one genuine when the day of the balloon’s appearance arrived." Other than that though, this was a pretty good piece of writing.
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