 Prospero the Magnificent 2009-07-11 . chapter 1This was not only creative, but extremely touching. I love how you began with the description of the socks, and ended on such a touching note.
That being said, there are a few typos that are slightly distracting such as "When I through the drifting snow," and "My wife had shown not one genuine when the day of the balloon’s appearance arrived." Other than that though, this was a pretty good piece of writing. |