it is a good story, so you should add more. that way it can be GREAT!!

Totally worth continuing. Go for it :D Though I must say I am more interested in your other story, The Art of Falling.

The thing I like alot about your stories, is that they have proper punctuation and grammar, and the characters are rather developed or show potential in BEING developed. I'm talking about both the stories I have read so far, not just this one.

It might be better if you let the reader get a better understanding of the setting and the characters physical traits before the story really starts to take off (this would be for The Art of Falling) and (for Damaged) you might want to keep the characters from being so stereotypical.

I think it's good so far. But, if you are going to continue it, please don't turn it into another one of those stereotypical stories where everything is really predictable.

A good start. I'm looking forwards to seeing how the characters and story develop...

Spawny