I am not sure what you are saying, but the tone makes me laugh, so at cross-purposes with the words. Really cool.

very very interesting poem. i really liked it. unique tone.

"The title says it all. Not really"

O.o okay, well done on the ryming ! xD

This is very interesting (very dark) and creative.i like how everything sounds so cheery. The end is especially great. Well done.
~403F