this is beautiful!

It's okay, though get over it , blasted people.

u r such a @#$%&! you insulte my work and yet this is what you write! This is so stuipid! No offense:)

I may only be fourteen, but I can relate.

I pushed him away, though. He freakin' graffitied my heart.

-Abby

I remember reading this ages ago but I guess I forgot to review it. Sorry.

What I really love about this is the idea of writing someone just as they are. It's like painting a portrait with words, which appeals to me because I can't paint for **, haha. Then there is the simplicity of the sweetness, and the quirky nature of the piece as a whole, and I dunno why but I really dig it.

Good, sincere and unified piece. I especially liked the part about not writing about things "subject to change" like hair and heart, which certainly do change with time. Somehow, I do not respond well to "hot breath" but maybe that is just me. This was my first attempt to read your material. I like it so far. You have depth. Mean that.

Aw!! That was so nice XD I really, really liked it. I loved: "You are music, beautiful and confusing" it was very thoughful, and incredibly emotive. Great job!

Hey! I just wanted to say thanks for the lovely review, and since you said our writing styles were quite similar I thought I'd probably enjoy your work as well. So here I am returning the review!

This was adorable. I like the fact the language is simple and yet the ideas are still very complex. There's ambiguity too. The narrator won't write the other's heart because it's "subject to change" - does that suggest everything isn't as perfect as it seems? I'm not quite sure what you're trying to say in this, which is why I like it. It's just a snapshot moment between two people rather than something that's trying to get a point across. That's refreshing. Anyway, I really enjoyed it and it got me thinking a lot, especially for something so short!

Hopefully I'll have time to read some more of your work later. :)

Emma

Wow...that was brillant!

Great job Miss. Katie!

Honestly, when I first started reading this I didn't think I was going to really like it. But the way the story flowed was incredible. Nothing felt awkward or out of place, and I felt you put a lot of thought into this. It has a lot of emotion and it connects with the reader well for being such a light read. I think this review is longer than it! Hahah. Good job!