This poem is rather abstract, and yet, the message is clear. It's important to let your loved one's rise to their full poetential. I really liked that the speaker ler her lover 'be the moon' for awhile--that's beautiful! :)

You expressed a lot of complex meanings/images here.

I liked the notion of letting someone go and be a part of something beautiful, even if it means being away from theme. That's the sense that I got when I read the first part about sending them to the moon. Lovely work.

Much love,
Juliet.

Wow. Stunning.
"I felt the craving
to send you to the moon and
bend your body around the circumference"
Ah, that is just so beautiful.
I can't even explain it.