Cool I like your writing style! :)

to borrow a friend's catch phrase Keep on Keepin On! :)

Hi! I was just about to read your story when I got really overwhelmed by the way it is formatted. I would sudgest trying to at least double space between paragraphs or indent. I think that if you do that, you will have more people read and review your story. Just a thought. Lots of Love,

RosePetal