very poetic

so he has two babies on the way?

OMIGOSH! So many chapters to go,
but i will have to stop for now
since there's so much else...
So, I love the story so far.
It's such a nice couple
and the children are by far so adorable
Not to mention the cool friends
You can imagine me fawning over this
Another good story from you
I'm really glad I got to read this.
Though I will stop for now...
Anyway
Thank you for sharing this story!

It's very well-written, though I would have preferred longer and less chapters. It was quite intimidating to see the amount of chapters before I started reading it. Nevertheless, you've done a great job, and I like how you managed to keep so many characters 'alive' in it. (And I mean that as in interesting and characters you actually remember.)

I never thought I'd finish reading this story, but I did. It truly was great.

Have I told you how much I like this story? lol I've read it twice now and I'm considering reading it again lol Rick and Pete are in my top five couples ( just sayin)

I thought the gay rights symbol was a pink triangle pointing down?

Your writing will read a lot more smoothly if you use contractions. Especially in internal and external dialogue. Unless it's a second language, everyone uses contractions.

I have reread this story from start to end and I still like it as much the second time as I liked it the first time. I can see little things I missed the first time in the story now. You did a great job on the story and I just wanted to tell you that again.

First let me say that I think is a wonderful story. However I really didnt like the ending. I think it was rushed and left alot of questions unanswered. I also think the relationship was rushed as Peter and Ric were only together for a week and you want me to believe that they just lived happly ever after? Then you have that Peter is very judgmental of others and I didnt like that part of his character. I enjoyed the story very much and dont want you to think that I didnt. However again I think it was rushed and could have been a little longer. Not in the number of chapters but in the story timing itself.

Wow, the number thingy is so complex. I should learn how to do that, but with English, Chinese, and French instead :D

OMG! I CAN'T BELIEVE THIS IS OVER ALREADY! SOOOOOOOO SAD!

Other then humans, dolphins and bonobos also have sex for pleasure :3

I've been in fanfiction for a while and basically read all the ones that were good (slash mostly) and then somehow found this site. I've gotta say, I love the original stuff just as much if not better than the fanfiction.

That being said, I just found this story and finished it last night after only about 3 days of reading. I loved it, Pete and Rick are so sweet and I wish the story wasn't over.

So hopefully when you get to a place you can write another one shot, I'd just like to throw in my vote for a future shot. I'd love to see these men in a few years.

Thanks for the ride. :-)

"When Luke and I spoke about his liking dark guys, I distinctly remember thinking that I didn't want to hear about him jerking off while thinking about my friends. My feelings in that regard have not changed." I laughed so hard after reading this. That moment was just awesome.

I've just spent the last 3 days reading this story in it's entirety! Gosh it's so very good! And when I read the authors note about a Vic and Luke story I got so excited! Now I best go see if you've posted anything on that! :)