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girl like cheshire 2009-07-14 . chapter 1
i love the balance here, of the profound and the sensible. for the profound, we've got "Love is never lost or leaving; it's within you" which, yes! wonderfully put. and then you thow in the food and water :) i can't quite figure out if you ment it as pure advice or if it's supposed to be coming off all-knowing, so i'll take it as both shades of the intelligent.

(where's the "applejack" ref. come from? all i can think of is the cereal.)
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