ending? loved it though :D xx

Love the character interaction. The chemistry between Chelsea and Travis is genuine. However, I'm wondering what the exact plot of this story is.

Keep writing and update at a more regular pace.

"Chelsea, this is very important. Do you find my manly buns attractive?" hahahahaha!

OMG! This is so hirlarious! I love Travis' cute one-liners and their awkward, love-hate kinda relationship. You're a super duper awesome writer. Keep it up, I wanna read more about this hilarious couple!

What happened to him? I guess the bike must mean something important to him...

I'm not really a fan of the way it flows sometimes, like in their heated argument to apologizing to one another, it just seemed to quick.

This was great continue!

I think it's funny that she says peace when he leaves haha but this looks really good

LOL! the ending made me laugh. though im sorry that she didnt get her kiss :(. that was just wrong of him for being such a

PLEASE CONTINUE

i like it! :D

Interesting way to begin a story; entertaining and humorous at the same time! :)

I love how Chelsea and Travis are so comfortable with each other. I can just imagine them having that conversation...

My heart literally stopped beating, hoping that Travis would give her a kiss or do something, but maybe... it'll happen sometime in the later chapters! *wink, wink*

I really hope you continue this, and I'm most definitely going to alert this! Your story really has a lot of potential, but I guess it depends on where you can take this. :)

Love2ReadnWrite

What exactly is this story's plotline?

The chemistry between Travis and Chelsea seems very strong, just from this short intro. Please continue!

lol your summary got me.. lol YOU SUC! Hard? hashahah but yea cute and quippy not really like thick like i'm used to but cute update soon