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collycoco 7/15/09 . chapter 1Well Ello! Its been too long since we talked. Grr someone reviewed before me...they shall pay! xD hhaha Anyway, Im surpised this is about friendship. Dont get me wrong, I love it; it flows well, you can really tell this certian issue is bothering you. But it sounds more of a love poem to me. PSSH! I can have it completely wrong. I probably am. To me, its like you lost this person and now in a way you are wanting them back even though you dont. Fave line:A lesson learned, a song we’ve heard A common goal achieved Comedic lies and alibis That no one here believes Nice poem! MOREE! psh I shouldnt be talking. I need more poetry! |
C. M. Levy 7/15/09 . chapter 1It has got a good, smooth flow and a meaningful point :D |