@Susanna: Haha.. I'm not telling :P

Aww. Sweetness.
Does the "you" have a name? ;)

AW

I like the rhyme scheme you used and the repetition as well. Over all it flowed beautifully and I could feel the emotion and the what if's that are formed by such romantic dreams. Good job. :)

Very good, I loved the rhyming you used.

Can you look and review at some of my work. maining the development poem, Why? and Forbidden Love