really good. i like it! Keep on writing your poetry

Aw, glove... :( Me sad now.

Mm, I don't know if you can get much more perfect. The short lines are seemingly choppy but actually flow quite smoothly throughout the peice, and you create a mysterious imagery that doesn't give you an exact picture but just a short swirl of it.

You had lovely word choice, and I really liked just the quick little lines that brought out the story in the poem. Seriously, this is beautiful. :)

rolliepollie44

that is such a clever idea!
but on to the review ;)

love the twist you have put onto this. instead of being simply lost the glove is escaping (and this line-"were you escaping/ or suicidal?" took it three steps over the top of awesome, btw).

your descriptions are picturesque and perfect, the questions you pose are interesting and unique. def. should submit this.