aww that was so cute! I loved the line about the lotion. Reminded me of something similar that happened to my friend.

I also loved how you took all your memories and flowed them into one prospect. (happiness) It really brought the poem to a close nicely.

-Ec from the review marathon! (link in my profile)

I liked how you used colors to describe it. Colors always bring out feelings for me.

One thing I noticed, isn't kiss 4 letters? That kind of made me come out of the poem for a second so you might want to look at that.

I loved the last line. It was so adorable to me.

"sometimes I wait around just to get a glimpse of

you."

I didn't like the spacing here. I thought it took away from the flow of the poem.

--Ec form the review marathon (link in my profile)

Do the colours symbolise something? Yellow - happy, cheerful, hope? green - life, growth...
Just curious!
I like how you said the letters were strung together with thread. Nicely done. :)

Oh i like the last 2 lines! Very cute! :)