Oh, God. That was so, so funny. With him constantly reassuring himself that he is, in fact, a real man. And the little bits of insight that she provided, like, in the parentheses and all. And him just being like, I don't love her, I don't love her, I don't love her in the way that I kind of do love her. It was adorable and perfect because the characters seemed refreshingly... something. Not sure what, but fill in the blank with a positive adjective.

I loved it!

And for the author's note part:
- You may think this story is all kinds of weird, but somehow it works, haha. It's amusing and a bit different, which is good! :p
- I didn't think it moved too fast. :)

Keep up the good work!

it WAS fun. Loads of fun. And it all made sense.. no loose ends (no explainations either.. which lets the reader do some imagining :P )

And i'm glad he admitted so soon too. lol. what can i say.. i'm impatient.

Sukanya

I thought this was totally adorable!! I especially loved the "love is for pansies!" line...completely hilarious. Great job!! :)

This was TIGHT!

I don't have time to write more because the battery on my mom's laptop is seeping its life away, DANG IT.

But here's to pansies,

YAYAYYA!

:)

Enjoy.

I really liked this. It was sweet how he kept denying that he loved her and then he just came out with it. God, I wish I could write something as cute as this.

It was pretty cute and creative, though I do think she's all too forgiving. But I love how he's in denial, ahaha. I'm very glad Queen of Absolutely Everything added this to our c2. (:

i liked this story. XD but i LOVED the whole pansy thing. hahaha

wow... that was really good!

i wish it was longer =]

Haha, oh my gosh that was adorable! :D Loved it to pieces! His whole conflict was amazing. Great job!
-Aria

Hahahaha! I love this for its complete silliness. LOL. That man was trying too hard not to be a pansy... :D Great one-shot. Hahaha!

hehe he was trying so hard to admit to not fallin love and then he did.

what a pansy love it. so cute

Aww, this was cute. In a completely manly, un-pansy-ish way, of course. ;)

Aw what an adorable, manly pansy ;)

Whoever this pansy dude is, I like him lol. He's inner-dialogue is wicked funny, and I liked how he knows he's a pretty boy and therefore, more interested in proving himself not a pansy. The only thing I would have liked to see more, I think, is her reaction to the number on his arm. Some comment about how he hates when he does that, or something. I don't know lol. I'm rambling. In any case, this was really well-written and I really enjoyed reading it =)
Good job!
~Mia