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timepiece 2009-07-17 . chapter 1
“That table is like the sisterhood of the traveling alcoholics.” That is one of the most awesome lines ever. I also liked how you ended the dialogue, and having it as just dialogue worked well for this type of fiction. Anyway, I really enjoyed reading this. Thanks for the piece, and keep writing!
EMW 2009-07-16 . chapter 1
I love random scraps like this. Nothing bad to say.
Efinity 2009-07-16 . chapter 1
wow really well written! :) and funnyXD!!
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