That heart I supposedly broke beyond repair

It's my favorite line. You're a very talented writer. You write deep from your heart. Most people feel what you're saying, but can't explain it as you do. Well done!

It's different, but I like it:) The last few lines, especially. And the idea is great, too, with the butterflies and all. Sorry if this doesn't make much sense=/ Very little of what I say does anymore, especially when I'm trying to be helpful.

"The blare of the million hearts breaking
The fall of a thousand summer butterflies
Hit by early snow"

I loved those lines very much! They were very awesome! By the way, happy 93rd post! Hey you're almost to 100! Yay!! (I'm really hyper right now, pretty jacked up on Oreos!) =D