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Wow this story was VERY entertaining to read! I know theirs probably not gonna be another chapter for it, because of the Update date, but this is still a very nice oneshot I guess you would say.

I don't really know what to say, other than the obvious "this is amazing, please continue!" because this story left me stunned after I read it. ;] I definitely would read this until the end if you would continue it though. I'll wait patiently for your next update

well, you have clearly done a fine job setting the stage for this story - and i must say it is so intriguing, that i'm feeling a little let-down that you don't have more of it up yet :(. i admire the instant clarity that have mixed among the hazy and mysterious opening, and that is how distinct your characters are, so far. but it's definitely time to add more ! bon travail - et (encore) je l'ai bien aimé.

Wow, this one's definitely interesting although I have to admit, I was left hanging. T-T

At any rate, this was a nice start. I think Yumi is a kind of girl with a gloomy sort of past. She would make up a great character I think - same as Kai who, although cold towards the lass, seemed to 'secretly' care about her as I place it. :D I really want to know what happens next, especially with Kai attacking the ... Dæmon.

Is Kai really supposed to look after Yumi? I want to have all the enigmas in here deciphered! I'm getting giddy in anticipation here! And I don't think this is done as a spur-of-the-moment notion, is it? Because I could sense that you've prepared a rather good plot. :))

In general, I'm taking fondness of this. Keep the updates coming and make the story even MORE interesting! XDD I promise I'd hyperventilate too much if after ages you wouldn't update this. \:D/

sera-chan

Cool, keep writing!

nice. nice vair, vair nice! I lurve iyt! next chappie pleease?

aww:((

i wonder what happened? She seems so lonely and sad.

I think you did a good job at the excerpt, but you better watch your punctuations. Well, that's all i have to say, and the rest is all good! Hope you post the next chapter up, and thanks for reviewing my story too :3