Great, write more please.

Heya. I noticed that you wanted a beta and I would be happy to give it a go for you if you are still in need of one. I don't have a fiction press account which may be a bit of a difficulty but if you were still interested then you can find me on livejournal: liss_dv or hotmail: .uk

Great first chapter too and best of luck writing it. Liss

I really like all the snippets going on here. It makes this chapter really intriguing, not to mention it leaves the reader in suspense! Can't wait for more :)

Wow. i really wanna know what happenned to that ship! "not every day you lose a 250 thousand tonne crude tanker"
ah yes, so true!
It's an interesting storyline/plot that you're setting up, can't wait to see where the next chapter leads!
:)

I'm very curious as to where this is going to go. Sounds super from what you've posted though!

[The Doctor had said to keep excitement down to a minimum. So he had to go and get himself kidnapped by a god damn pirate.]
LOL, though I think goddamn is one word, though that might just be stylistic preference, lol

I see this time we're starting right off with action and a bit of backstory, should be interesting and I'm looking forward to it :)

So far this is interesting. I like the exposition and the character interaction.

Please do continue when you're able to. :-)