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Reviews For: The Voice
Isca 2009-07-20 . chapter 1
"Last night I woke alone and heard a whisper in my ears." Excellent opening. The fear that the speaker feels is very present here. The line, "It left at morning light," was particularly beautiful. :)
Zippie The Nerd Gone Wild 2009-07-17 . chapter 1
This was a great poem, you did a really good job. :)
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