Haha that was funny. Nice flashbacks.
The Introduction was a bit blocky and quick but the main plot immersed me into your story.
I could also see you added some of your flare.
A Classic Jane's.
I also admire how you weaved and connected everything together so well.
Thanks for the story! and See you laterz.

Aw loved it
And not AWLL couples divorce..
Hopefully I won't in the *near* future
20/07/09

heey!! this is a great story! let me guess, you wrote this for summer school in your writing class?

I'm pretty damn sure your teacher loved your story, good job girl! I was practically yelling at Charming, the dense fool, when he didn't immediately recognize Ella!
Grtz Silencia

Aww, I really liked this! The whole new idea behind the fairytale is way better than the original, and I LOVED the whole "de ja vu"-like sequence betwen Charming and Ella! So cute ...

Anyhow, it's very awesome, I just found it a little choppy in some places.

And I totally love Dukey and how he arrested the step mum for child labour! lol!

Great story. Totally loved it!

~JEM~