I really like the metaphor in here, reality and dream just can't mix.

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I really like this. I think your imagery is just amazing here. You can visual all of this taking place even though it's such an abstract concept.

I also like your word choices. "crystalline" and "reconstruct for example are really wonderful.

This is really good writing. It's powerful and has great description too, I've noticed that you have a real knack for describing things in beautiful ways.

I would love opinions from a writer like yourself on my work. It would really mean a lot!

Wow!
First off, I loved the comparison and the concept of a kaleidoscope was so utterly unique and brilliant.
It was beautifully written, and a perfect piece of writing.
Excellent job!
~Melody

"Blink. A new form replaces the old." The word 'blink' very much reminded me of the word 'flash,' in the sense that the 'kaleidoscopic' imagery corresponded well to photography. In both cases: a new form replaces an old one. A short, yet powerful piece. :)

Reminds me of looking at the world through rose colored glasses. Kaleidoscopic metaphors for the complexity of life. Waking up to reality is sometimes a sad and sobering event.

The song "a line allows progress, a circle does not" comes to mind because of the blinking, it reminds me of a camera.

Over all I'd say I liked this but maybe wish it were a little longer, though the 100 words is an interesting touch. Very nice imagery. Keep on writing!

Very poetic, I find. And 100 words exactly to boot. I find myself feeling like the worlds going to fast from how it's described. Or at least, that's what I remember about feeling like this.

I like how you've written it. Especially the middle paragraph. It's very good imagery.