   Zhandra01 2009-11-21 . chapter 2Hi *waves*
I just found your story and I’m have to say I'm just loving it. I hope you will write more soon, because I’m very interested how it will go on.
Good luck & happy muses
Zhan |
 Twelfth Night 2009-11-11 . chapter 1I love the way the narrator voices the unsaid opinions of those around him, and this sounds really interesting. It's well-written and your writing style is very nice. Feel kind of bad for Andrew, having to be patronized all the time.
Why does everyone think he's so vulnerable? |
 AnnaG.Luv 2009-10-03 . chapter 2I really like this story. |
 Cut and Paste 2009-10-02 . chapter 2Andrew's awkwardness is very endearing and his hallucinations are very creative. I want to see him get better. :) |
 Dramatizer 2009-10-02 . chapter 2Andrew is so cute and crazy and not over-the-top. |
 Tinyyellowboxes 2009-09-13 . chapter 1A very interesting start even if it was incredibly depressing. I still want more! XD |
 we are zombies 2009-08-23 . chapter 1I really like this so far! It's very interesting, and I like Andrew already. The bit about the walls leaking was hilarious, in a sad sort of way.
I'm looking forward to where this will go. I hope you do continue it. |
| AnnaG.Luv 2009-08-16 . chapter 1 Wow. i really hope you choose to continue this soon. |
| Cut and Paste 2009-08-15 . chapter 1 Aww...:(
This story is so bittersweet. Update! |
 plumblossom 2009-08-15 . chapter 1I think you're right: there's a definite leap in cohesion and maturity to this piece. Which isn;'t a diss on _Hey Jude,_ it's only proper that your writing should evolve.
I'd like to see where this goes. |
 XxnickixX 2009-07-18 . chapter 1hey, really like the story so far. Keep it up! |
 Too Lazy to Log In 2009-07-18 . chapter 1 Very nice! Even if it is just a pet project, I think you should definitely continue. Hey Jude is wonderful, so much so that it's just not enough to have only ONE Potatoe story update to look forward to. And this is oozing wells of potential. ;) |
 zombie toast 2009-07-18 . chapter 1I like the way you write. Throughout the whole story I was well captivated. I like where this is going and I can't wait for more :) |
| meep 2009-07-18 . chapter 1 um I'm not stalking you (much) honest!
I really like it; the tone of the piece, how Andrew is both vague and distracted but smart and very precise. The hints that there's maybe something more going on.
The last line of this is good to about the clown, it's so matter of fact and manages to say a lot more than the basic.
Now I feel bad though, you prefer this to Hey Jude? But I want both... |
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