teehee alex! just as awesome as i knew you'd make him, although dorian is so lovable. well in my opinion anyway
although the last name, like yours truly pointed out..did it have to be jackson? XD
either way awesome chap and update soon! i dont care what excuses you give me, the next chapter must be out before the end of september at least!

And how did i know Dorian was gonna turn out like that XD
Oh man.. why the last name Jackson?? WHY

An update finally! YEAY

Love this so far. Jackie is so very funny. I can imagine her slamming that kid's face in the math book...

And now we have the introduction of her new partner...this is going to be very interesting

good work

awesome start dude! this'll be a great story, i know it. esp with your natural sarcasm coming through. dont abandon this like you did with dreams of st george yeah? whatever happened to that story anyway? xP

Ahh very nice.. x

I really liked this. I like her sarcasm, and I bet she is as tough a detective as the men in her squad. I can see her using her feminine wiles when needed though...:)

Good start