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pinkeclipse 2009-11-02 . chapter 1
Love the story! Please continue writing!
pinkeclipse 2009-11-02 . chapter 2
Thank you for the chapter!
pinkeclipse 2009-11-02 . chapter 3
Thanks for the chapter!!
pinkeclipse 2009-11-02 . chapter 4
Can't wait till her mom meets her new friends!!
Aspiemor 2009-11-01 . chapter 2
Well I hope this review helps. Thsi addition was good. From Greece I can imagine theres more than what is seemingly going on. Everything looked okay grammer wise and I like the siblign fighting. I actualyl liked high school. It was middle school I didn't like. Keep up the good work and I hope this review was good.
Aspiemor 2009-10-26 . chapter 1
Okay sorry I have not read any of your stuff in a long time but honestly I think you should get to the other stories especially Puppet Master. ITs a good opening and I have not read a lot of mythology stuff. I think I will chek this out and see where the story goes from here. Other than that again sorry for the lack of reading. Until next time.
Moody Chaser 2009-10-26 . chapter 4
Wow! Great Story, At first all I thought was that the 12 transfer students were really Apollo, Zeus, Artemis Aphrodite, Ares etc etc... but I could be wrong...

Great story, Hm... Already trying to guess who Hector is...

Who is he anyway?;)
Angel's Requiem 2009-10-25 . chapter 1
I love mythology, so this idea immediately intrigued me. Placing this type of story in the modern age is a unique idea, and sure to be interesting! I'm very curious about what exactly the prophecies about her are. And if there's one thing that's true about all myths, it's that there's no running from prophecies!

This was very well written; although short, it was full of description, which is great. I'll definitely be reading more soon!
Xx-Angel-of-Shadows-xX 2009-10-25 . chapter 4
Now here's a question...Alice...maybe a daughter of Demeter? That could explain the freedom with nature. Or...bah, I don't know! That's a tricky one!

Another fantastic chappie, very amused by all of these, but Erin's vicious! Daughter of the goddess of chaos (Whose name I can't remember). I'm not sure...I'd say Aphrodite, but then she insulted someone else for rambling on about fashion, so that's an almost definite no. Daughter of Ares? Maybe...

Anyway, well done on this chappie. XD

~Star~
Xx-Angel-of-Shadows-xX 2009-10-25 . chapter 3
Aww...too sweet! Great chappie again, well done!

Liking Dennis, let me guess...son of Dionysos? That would explain the hangover.

All the quick convos between the un-introduced people got a bit confusing...but that's my one criticism.

Great work!

~Star~
Xx-Angel-of-Shadows-xX 2009-10-25 . chapter 2
Ha! Love the quite bonding then...

"GIVE ME THE TWINKIES!"

That made me laugh. ^^

Another great chapter, well done! The potential romance between Cassie and Hector is just too cute!

~Star~
Mr Ragna Badguy 2009-10-25 . chapter 2
Herro there. Me again. :) Anyway, I guess this is just an intro chapter to let the readers know the characters. Anyway, I'm having this weird idea that Hector and his friends are actually some kind of Greek pantheon avatars or something like that. And the name hectore sounds remotely familiar in terms of Greek mythos. Care to enlighten me on that? ;) As for Cassandra, I guess it's a no-brainer that she's the baby from the prologue. Anyway, it seems that the plot could go any direction at this moment that I'm reading this, so I'll be curious to see what you can do next. :) And just something that is bugging me here. During the part where Cassandra and Hector were exchanging notes, I think you should take into account the time needed for writing the words. From my own point of logic, given the possible time needed to do so, the teacher would have more or less realised it. Just something that I've suddenly thought up here. :)

P.S: Thanks for you review on The Eternal Grail. Pay back via a nice review for this story again. :)

-From The Roadhouse. :)
Gilly-ARose-WithA-Broken-Heart 2009-10-25 . chapter 4
Yay! I missed this!

Hmm, I can't seem to figure out who Alice's is... (Don't tell me, it gives me something to do xD)

Peace,
Gilly ^^
Mr Ragna Badguy 2009-10-25 . chapter 1
Herro there. Hope you still remember me, but I doubt so. :S Anyway, interesting prologue here in a sense that I wonder what exactly the prophecies are all about and how the gods will play into the future plot. And I wonder who is the baby's parents since I guess it will more or less be a vital link in the plot. :) Apart from that, nothing much to say since this chapter is super short.

P.S: Pay back this review via The Eternal Grail. :)

-From The Roadhouse. :)
HeavenHellButterfly 2009-10-24 . chapter 4
Hmm, very interesting chapter. What's up with the dream at the end though, is that alluding to something in future chapters? I'm glad you updated, please do again soon!
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