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| Reviews for Mongrel |
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  Guest 9/21/12 . chapter 23 Do we get both of them because yu m yum they are awesome! |
 non.graceful 9/14/12 . chapter 24I feel like fangirling. I don't do that. I like your style ... Of writing |
| non.graceful 9/14/12 . chapter 11 Is it weird that I feel that Logan is a great character? He's somewhat intriguing but seems as if he'd be more of a bestfriend to Aria than a fiancé |
| non.graceful 9/14/12 . chapter 4 You are a magic wonder |
| non.graceful 9/14/12 . chapter 3 I don't regret picking this *up*! It is awesome. Things have just gotten interesting |
| non.graceful 9/14/12 . chapter 2 Did I mention that I love the title to your story? No? Well it's pretty cool The ending of your chapters is always better than the start. |
| non.graceful 9/14/12 . chapter 1 It's pretty well written but somehow it's so .., you've used big descriptive words to illustrate a scenery, yet it wasn't clear to me. If I had to change one bit in this it'd be where you describe the flower as the description isn't clear and it doesn't spark an immediate object within my mind. I liked it :) |
| Siryan 9/14/12 . chapter 24 Love this story! Can't wait till the next update. Keep up the good work! |
| StaNdUPtomE 9/9/12 . chapter 24 All the confusion... Let's go save zoey break the bracelet and have Paden and Ariana babies |
| Love in All Forms 9/9/12 . chapter 24 Yay! Some action between Paden and Aria :) :) :) |
| Devilish Kisses 9/8/12 . chapter 24 Update soon :) |
| Devilish Kisses 9/8/12 . chapter 15 :O LOGAN! |
| Devilish Kisses 9/8/12 . chapter 4 LOL, I would treat daddy's new squeeze like that too if she was a bitch to me |
| Devilish Kisses 9/8/12 . chapter 1 Loving it so far :) |
| Silver Witherwings 9/8/12 . chapter 24 That was a very hot scene once again, but - where are the condoms? Unless you are intending for them to have unprotected sex, then there should be some sort of mention of birth control. Just sayin' ;) |
