 lace over chocolate 2009-12-06 . chapter 1This was so cute! I'm really glad that I read this :) |
 todrownandburn 2009-12-06 . chapter 1This was really good!
Like to read more of this actually. :D |
 Super.Secret.Music.Mission. 2009-11-12 . chapter 1I LOVED that. I especially liked how she threw eggs at his car. Go girl Go! :P |
 xxXNightsareDaysXxx 2009-08-15 . chapter 1Nope *grinning*, it was awesome! |
 lolacakes 2009-07-31 . chapter 1This was very cute... and funny.=) |
 TJamie 2009-07-24 . chapter 1I loved this. And your attempt at humor was good enough that it made me laugh out loud, causing my brothers to look at me funny. And I actually wrote for the same contest, but never submitted it. With competition like you, I don't think I would have had a chance anyways. That's a compliment, by the way.
Anyway, good job, glad you posted it. And keep writing. |
 msallaroundperfect 2009-07-24 . chapter 1I like it. I especially like chase. |
 brightest darkness 2009-07-24 . chapter 1really cute, except her insecurities and views of herself were a little bit of a put down as the reader... it made me feel like she was too insecure for anything, let alone a relationship. that would lead to her idolizing the guy. this was a good idea, otherwise. and its well written. i like the name chase :) do you think you could do another oneshot as a sequel or companion ? that would be cool. |
 Appa the Gypsy 2009-07-24 . chapter 1Aw! How lovely! Hehe. Those were some cheap eggs! |
 Katie Valentine 2009-07-24 . chapter 1No no I find it funny! :D A kinda sweet too, bah. *melts* |
 cookiewolf 2009-07-22 . chapter 1haha awesome lawl eggs thats so random haha |
 SunsetRainbow 2009-07-21 . chapter 1FREAKING ADORABLE!
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 x3life 2009-07-20 . chapter 1aw how cute =) |
 gulistanlik 2009-07-20 . chapter 1Omg I laugh so. hard during the egg pelting, I had tears running down my cheeks and a stitch! That was excellently written, and I liked how you pulled off the plot, added your own originality to it, no matter how common the plot line is.
Particularly due to the humour, I'm favouriting this. =D |
 Lily Llynn 2009-07-20 . chapter 1I don't think this was lame! Haha. I do think he's awfully forgiving (then again he does really like her), and this was really cute. A tad unrealistic, but I liked the quirkiness and I thought this was quite creative. (: I'm very glad artistic dreamer added this to our c2. (: |