Oh this was so so so GOOD!! Saint, I'm ashamed for not getting to this sooner! **Hides face with tear**
The beginning was really good how you re-introduced the villain and you even let us know that he is on a time table which helps set the pace for the story.

I love, simply love,love,love, that little bedroom scene. I was like - 'Aw Victor, you're so shy, just cuddle with her man!' The budding romance was well written and it was not like thrown at us. I like how you put within your descriptions that Victor has feelings for her too he's just no sure how to say things and it makes the story even better. I love how they have the little love hate thing going on and I know that is going to be a such an element of drama for this when you tell us about how Edward is looking at the whole picture!

I really need to get with this and I apologize for getting to it late, but I assure you it was never forgotten. I will be getting to the rest very soon, and in advance...Update SOON!!

Momo

Poor, poor Edward. I know how he feels. Well, not about the vampire part, but yeah. And he's a lot better than the hypocritical Mr. Cullen. And the scene in the club was very well-written. I liked it a ton. At the end you could feel Jinxy's pain about losing her sister. Great imagery.

Update soon!

Well, it doesn't look like Edgar is a vampire after all. Too bad, that would have been quite the scandal. Aww, it's so cute how Jinxy and Victor are almost-friends, even though he still "wants/has" to kill her. Great job!

Popped your comment cherry! This chapter is awesome, by the way. Gives Edgar's character a little more depth than in the first book. I'm looking forward to seeing what's wrong with him.

Also the part with Jinx and Victor was adorable! My heart melted a little.



~Reigh~
Your cousin lolol!