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Reviews For: Laundromat: A Short Story
Lynn-Night 2009-07-29 . chapter 1
Cute but at the same time, sad. But I liked it a lot. Good job! :)
xenolith 2009-07-20 . chapter 1
Sweet. I loved it. Particularly: "but I liked the days when I caught him smile. That meant it was a good day."

Wistful and beautiful, especially since you managed to convey it all in so little words. I liked the grass and the sun and the imagery, it made it all seem like a memory, something real and held on to.
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