I love your story! I think you like having readers questions things, which I suppose is a good thing. Great start!

I like this, because it leaves a lot of unanswered questions, a good way to draw the reader in. The only thing I was confused about was about the woman, because you refer to her as a 'woman', a 'child', and a 'young woman', which made it sort of difficult to figure out an age for her. (And the jump from 'woman' to 'child' in particular was hard to follow - I thought there were two different people or something.)

Happy writing!

-Othello, from the Review Marathon (see the link on my profile for details)

I like the way you forced me to keep on reading...sometimes i find it hard to start a story because im uncertain if i should spend time one it. I found it grasping. I hope to read more...good luck. Oh but just to make this review critically when luther slips away into the third dimension...i dont really understand why...Doesnt he want the key? Was the man hurting him or something? So yeah good luck :)