love this story.:D very realistic.:D well done.:D

Hey! Great oneshot, I loved reading it! :)

super cute

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super cute. :P
Favorite writer.

i love how your stories make my heart ache. (:

Nice one! Magnetism... that word makes an impact!

Nicely done as usual. Lovely character development and plot progression. :) Best of all it made me smile.

That was very well written. I enjoyed it so much it's crazy cause I don't feel that way that easily about one shots. But dayuum too sick. Thanks for writing such a story. =D

He knew that it was only a matter of time that the world to see what he always saw.

i think it's not the right way to say it. It sounds a bit off this sentence.

Otherwise, i hope u win! it's a real contest right?
This is good and so creative! I love ur brain. lol

Loved it!! Really great job!

Cute!! Loved it :) Good luck in the contest!
-Aria

Nice~ such a sweet story =D though it ended quite abruptly. Or maybe im surprised to see characters being direct for once.. Im glad it isnt the usual hate turned to love of high schoolers, there is a nice spin on it

aw this was really cute =)

Hithar. (: So as usual, I love your work, but I'd just like to point out a few things:
"He knew that it was only a matter of time that the world to see what he always saw." Is it supposed to say "until the world saw" or something similar? As it is, it doesn't quite make sense, grammatically.

"His cries if pain would draw Haley in." Cries of pain, I'm guessing.

"The bridal gown was figure-flattering and pretty..." I just thought this was confusing because I thought bridal gown describes the bride's gown only.

Also the first conversation between Zach and Leo was a little confusing. But besides all that, I loved this, and I think it was quite realistic, though I do wish there was a little more hate, haha. But I think that's just because I'm sadistic. XD I'm very glad artistic dreamer added this to our c2. (: