but, but, wait what happens?!?

You can't just leave it there!?!

I really like where you've gone so far and have all my fingers and toes crossed that there is much more to come.

I really like your story so far. I'm glad that Mikaine is using Jessica by keeping her safe, it sounds like he'd be a useful person to have protecting you.
Can't wait to read more, please update soon :)

cant wait for the nexts one

oh! Now that is forshadowing at its best. I know I remember something of Akull (and it's nagging, and right there at the surface and begging me to truly remember), but I don't want to ask if I remember correctly because I don't want to ruin it in case someone should read the reviews before they decide to read it. He was the one with the harem, right? I think I remember really not liking him. I thought originally there were more than 12.. but you ended up killing some of them off, so it doesn't really matter. Just hoping I'm not confusing myself for no reason.

Anyway... now that I've proven I can remember insignificant details years later... moving on. I really like how this is developing. It's much more detailed than I remember the original stories- I remember them ending with a 'I just met this character' type vibe. I really like the changes!

perv. she's like a child to him

Aw! How sad! But i don't like that lady! She's horrible. That valintine girl or whatever her name is. Evil...

of course, climb in the car and go to sleep with a hot, appealing guy you just met. AND you don't even know his name. SMART!

do I sense a lemon?
great job

Ooh... history lessons! Lol. Not much to say- since after all this seems like just a 'fill in the blanks' chapter- but good work!

ahh... the story of how it all began
i actually have no bad opinion of Gabriel
great job

oh it's getting even more interesting! But, darn. Just had to end as he was telling about their history. Anyway moving on, Keep writing! I can't wait for the next chapter!! Please don't take very long to get the next part out though? *puppy dog eyes* ;)

Nice update! I really like the direction this is going! I can't wait to see more!

i think this is about the time she freaks out ;)
great job

great job
lol i love how Mikaine is

great job
i fell bad for Gabriel and Jessica
keep the good work up