Interesting choice of names, they ring a bell from somewhere but I am just not sure where. Great Chapter. If homes tell something about the person then I wonder what all she takes as unimportant other than the party. Then again, I have to wonder if the twins didn't just kill her. I don't think you ever said if the newly turned vampires are weak or strong, or maybe my imagination is just running away with me.

I love this story! The characters are fantastic, and the plot is very engaging. I was trying to wait until the end to review, but I had to agree with Locke about Hugo 110%.
The only criticism for the whole story is that it moves a bit fast in places. I know that after criticizing Hugo's work it is hypercritical to say this, but there are a few places especially with Hop and Locke's interactions where it seems more could be described.
I cannot wait to finish reading though!!

:)

Ahaha ohh man i just LOVE Locke and Hope's relationship! It's just so darn cute!! Great chapter! More soon please! :)

thanks leave me guessing what happened to selena lol. i cant wait until you update again!

I want more plus the romulus and remus gesture are you referring some ties to werewolfism.

Thanks for the chapter, Romulus and Remus? As in when Rome started, fitting names for people who have just gained power ;)

IM SO EXCITED! Lol, : ) this was awesome & I love where the story is going ^_^

This story is greatly interesting and I have really enjoyed reading it thus far. But I do think that their relationship is moving slightly fast. Please keep up the good work. Thank you and I hope you will update soon.

great!!

This story is great but listen you've already incoporated alot of awful events where rape has taken place. So how about being a good author and a good human being and instead of creating conflict by having Hope cornered and raped at the party (which I know ur going to do). You instead have Locke come in and save the day BEFORE she's raped by that evil ** selena and those stupid twins, that way ur a good person and a good author b/c u still have good conflict, fight scene or whatever.

I hope u update soon (unless u planing on having Hope raped then I hope you never update again)

Awesome! I can't wait for the next chapter!! :D UPDATE SON! :):):)

i love this story...update soon!

Nice chapter! I liked the detail with Lars, I do hope that he remains in the story since you seem to have put a decent amount of work into making him a personalized character. I also really like the detail put into making Locke a very real character, complete with turn ons and family! Nice to humans seems to run in the family.

Maybe I missed it, was there a description of Hope's dress? I can understand suspense if I just missed the whole idea of it in there though. I'm a little scatterbrained today, so I may have just missed the whole description of the dress.

great chapter!!