Aw, no! It was really cute! Feel no shame!

Lol hi :D

"They emitted auras of pure excitement, but some invisible bubble of gloom stopped the dangerous radiation from doing me any harm."

I love that bit; have I told you that? xD

"I was going to be part of the rainbow for what, an unmeasurably small fraction of a millisecond?"

How sad. D: Also, my google spellchecker underlines unmeasurably. "Immeasurably"? D8

It's smoother now that Mother Nature doesn't randomly single the rainbow out and decide to lecture it 8D

Btw, it reminds me of your raindoll collection... thing 8D

What an imaginative story! Bittersweet too, those are the best kinds...