Again, this chapter had an edge to it that kept me interested. It wasn't quite what I was expecting after the first installment, but it was still good. The first bit had set this up nicely and this propels the plot a bit more along with a general character to reader connection. Nice work! Please keep it up!

This was beautiful and brash, both raw and refined. You've managed to fully connect with the reader about what's going on and it honestly feels as if your character is a real person. The narative's witty and casual, dangerous and calming and exciting all at the same time. Plus, you've managed to set the reader up well for what's to come between how the narrator thinks and plot wise. I'm earnestly interested in reading more! Fantastic work!

PS.
Dropkick Murphy = Love.

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Stories like ‘Hot Rock to You’ are my idea of an imperfect fairytale.

I have heard how tattooing is connected with sex, but never anal. Now I think about it that is a very correct assumption, which is making me slightly apprehensive to be getting my first tattoo, heh. I simply love Hot Rock to You. I have a very short attention span when it comes to reading, unless the story is something that captures me after the first few lines, and I must say that with Hot Rock to You it had me at the words anal sex. Haha! I fervently await your next chapter.

Take care. x
N. J. Sawyer

Wow, I really like this story. I wish I could say that in a more articulate fashion, but it's six a.m., so this is about as articulate as I'm going to get. Anyway, it's awesome, and I can't wait for the next update. Keep up the good work.

-Paige

You start off this story really well -- you've established an extremely strong personality for your character and I love the way she talks/writes/speaks/expresses herself. (read: I like your writing style.) Keep it up. I'm dying to meet her best friend (I have this feeling that he or she will be just as interesting).

Wow. I don't think I've actually ever been left speechless by a single starting chapter of a story but here I am with nothing to say. I feel that, just from this chapter, this story will be so different than anything I've read on this site and I love that. That introduction to your main character really got me hooked onto this thing. I really don't know what else to say except that I can honestly say that I'm very much looking forward to your next update.
Please excuse my terrible review and just know that I really, really, really like this.

Huh, never thought to connect anal with tattooing. I wish this chapter was just a bit longer, but it's going to be interesting to see how it turns out. I'm not sure, but either your mention of anal is going to drive off people, or pull in the little 13 year olds by the hordes. Can't wait to see what you have next.

(I was too lazy to login, but if you're interested, that's my account username.)