|Reviews for old shoes|
| KelaBelle 7/22/09 . chapter 1
Wow, nice poem .
| gg. lass 7/22/09 . chapter 1
this is very cute.
i like the rhyming.
and the last stanza was definitely my favorite. i always get like that to, when i meet someone amazing i try to remember something about what i was wearing and pretend it's good luck ;]
yours until the wind changes,
| dragonflydreamer 7/22/09 . chapter 1
Cute. Simple and really sweet.
Just a quick grammatical note: I think you meant "the" in the first line of the second stanza :)
| dear maery 7/22/09 . chapter 1