aw! i love it. its so cute and sweet!

Oh! Nice twist!

And once again I've fallen in love with your mad poem making skills xD

Fantastic!

You truly have a talent for poetry! Keep writing!

Wow, this is a sweet yet harsh story. A very good telling of the origins of the naming of this particular flower. I like it.

"Stupid boy, learn to swim. Tsk, tsk."

Aw, good twist to it though.

I enjoyed reading this one. Poor guy. xD

I liek those flowers too.

Awesome poem.

Keep writing, mkay?