|Reviews for Brown Eyes|
| fictionullFreaK 7/25/10 . chapter 1
Beautiful. I especially like it because I can indentify with it.
| InfatuatedCritic 7/30/09 . chapter 1
Amazing poem. :)
| KelaBelle 7/23/09 . chapter 1
that was lovely x
| rebeldork 7/23/09 . chapter 1
This is a really odd poem, in my opinion. Not bad - just odd. There are a few small errors (you said "finali" but I think you mean "finale", that sort of thing). Sometimes I feel you might've changed the meaning of a line in order for it to rhyme and that gives it a slighthly awkward feeling (especially in the second stanza).
I do like it, though. I like the feeling that comes across, this almost selfless, eternal romance. The second time I read this, I imagined music with it, and I think it would work very well as a song, perhaps some kind of ballad. :)