This is so funny! True too, I'm not giving it to my boyfriend!

Hi! It's Mo! I got an account :)

Please please PLEASE Update asap!

~Mo~

plz cant wait till next chap so far its been so awesome

OMFG. continue.

i must say that i've been caught in your story. I really love it! i hope you're still going on with this story its refreshing and interesting. cliche` but in another sense unique.

I like Charlie's character. I also like the interaction between Wes and Charlie. Wes is another character i like. I'm hoping Charlie will play a part in teaching Ashton a lesson. Especially how he sabatoged her ride. I'd be pissed! Then i'd kick his ass for being a dick. lol. keep up the awesome job!! i look forward to the next installment. =]

This is the first of your stories I am reading!
It's great so far!!

You have to update soon, okay?

But wouldn't it be funny if Charlie fell for someone else and Ashton had to try to get her back? I think it would be :)
Well, not funny... but ironic. Since the girls are usually chasing him. Not vice versa.

Update SOON!

~Mo~

Ryn, as always, I congratulate you for a more-than-awesome chapter!! xD
Love this story, and tell your beta to double-check, even TRIPLE-check AFTER she's triple-checked next time... You know why? xD
Anyways, hurry writing. Hurry, ok? I'm not kidding. That's the only thing I'll be telling you on MSN... Or rather... No, here's what I'll tell you: READ PJ AND HON! NOW!! Hehe.
Awesome story.
-K

i dont get boys. :))

it was completely worth the wait!
i don't know who ashton really reminds me of, but he's quite a funny character. I don't want Charlie to fall for him, but evidently she is! it's terrible lol but still, makes a great story!
I'm really glad that your writing style is still the same though! it's got similar humor to the way you wrote the sadie stories :)

charlie, do not get caught in this little trap be happy with your Ashton free life for a while. this story is interesting - hope you update soon

i like a girl that can stand up for herself...lol
i think it funny when guys that think they know that girls dont know that what theyre up to, when it never really works and the girls knows exactly whats up and she doesnt CARE... awesome story tho! keep updating!

I like this story. Well-written. And the whole idea with the "seduction steps" is really cute and creative. Those kinds of lists are always so much fun to make, don't you think? XD

And the line Vince said... ah, here it is: “Oh yes,” Vince said, his words dripping with sarcasm. “I just want to tear those clothes off and bake sexy cookies off your hot body.”

Agh, hilarious. I wanna bake sexy cookies. I bet they'd taste better than the average Man-Cookie. XD

Is Vince gay? Or just, I don't know, metrosexual? Or maybe Ashton just has a really big ego?? So far, I'm thinkin' big ego, what with that list of girls (I wonder if people really have those lists? O_o)

But, anyway, I'm really excited to read the next chapters. And the next steps. Update soon!!

This just keeps getting better and better. I love how you can effortlessly flow between scenes. I also like the addition of this Wes guy, it makes things interesting. Your characters are developing well and Ashton's logic is interesting. Look forward to more. Happy writing.

This is excellent. Really well written. Looking forward to reading more!

Oh my god, Ryn, this is AWESOME! YOU HAVE GOT TO UPDATE SOON!! PLEAASE!
I'M BEGGING HERE!
Anyways, this story is amazing and I love it and I need you to write more.
Bye! xD
-K