Hey there! I'm Rosie from a website called A Drop of Romeo and I'm happy to say that your poem has been added to our site under the category of 'Miscellaneous'! Here's your review:

Rosie Thinks: I've never been a huge fan of poetry, but the first time I read this poem, I fell in love with it. It's just plain beautiful and hypnotic. It is a very deep poem that had me pondering on it's meaning well after I'd read it (for the third time, that is). The strange format adds to the overall feel of the poem and I think CuriousContradiction has been very creative and insightful with the layout. The use of parentheses was original and created further interest and meaning. The lack of capital letters really did add to the overall mood of the poem.

The imagery is just magnificent and really does capture one's emotions and imagination. The poem has a dark, almost obsessive feel to it, but I couldn't help but keep reading it over and over. It is just so raw, making the emotions almost visible. The words she uses are just sheer brilliance. The way she combines them is gripping and she has painted such a vivid picture with them. CuriousContradiction has a brilliant mastery of words to the point that she's made it an art. I'm glad that the talent in this poem has been recognised by SKoW, where CuriousContradiction won an award.

For some reason, I was readon this like rap...

Well done, you!

I can't really say anything apart from the fact that I absolutely love this. It's just... so clever. So brilliant! The words you use paint such a vivid picture, it's almost like I can see it unfolding right in front of my face. I can't begin to say how much I love everything about this. The brackets were well used, and I thought the lack of capital letters added a certain element that I can't really explain. Brilliance, pure beauty. Really well done!

beautiful.

oh my god. amazing. i absolutely adore this. i'm sure plenty of people have said this before me, but this is just incredible.

Simply amazing.

I.. Wow. I love it. Love the words with brackets. Just amazing.

this is so beautiful!

I LOVE THE WRODS YOU USE TO DISCRIBE,so different.

I can just hear that turning into an angsty song. I can swear that I was tapping my foot to it. "Dark january sarcasm", oh, so amazing. Loved the brackets. Good, GOOD work.

Flows so well.

i just wanted to let you know that i've nominated you for a SKoW award-and it has gone through. congratulations on the nomination, and i will be voting for this poem. your style is raw and beautiful, and i really appreciated all the references to neon and lights and the darkness. it's something i've become obsessed with over the years-like, the images, and to see them in your work was wonderful.

i will send you a PM with a line-by-line break down of your work within the next few weeks. unfortunately, school is holding me by the ears, and i can't spare the time i know it will take for me to sit down and read it how it deserves.

runtransatlantic

AMAZING.

Beautiful. Just freakin beautiful.

I love this. Really, really love it. It hits all my word-obsessions (stardust, electricity, insomnia, Icarus complexes, stutter-stammer-stumble) and it's beautifully written. I love the parentheses in particular and the ending is spot-on.

I just can't express just how completely, mind-blowingly perfect this piece is.

I feel truly and deeply honored that I have the opportunity to read your work.

Briana